The Official Writing Challenge
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This is good romance. I would have liked to have known a little more about John. Was he one of the owners/family? Why did he claim she had gotten the wrong clerk? There seems to be a little unsolved mystery here. But the writing is very good and the romance is certainly visible. Good job.
04/30/07
I like the open ending, and the hint of romance. The details seem a bit scanty, but it was a sweet story. Nice work!