The Official Writing Challenge
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I like the way John held a love in his heart for Emily, but never let it ruin his relationship with his friend. Nice romance. Good writing.
04/29/07
Very well written story here. You had me from beginning to end. One tip that was given to me though is an extra space between paragraphs for easier reading.
04/29/07
Beautifully written--a very engaging story. Well done!
04/30/07
So sweet and charming. Even though I expected the ending, the goose bumps were still there! Nice work