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A tender budding romance here. Good writing. I just wondered how a cabbie could stay that long in one place while on duty. But a good story in all.
This got me from the start and left me wanting more.
Tears came to my eyes as Elspeth told about her father's condition and I loved the way Mannie kissed her hand, making her blush. Such a kindhearted cab driver and a great story.

I liked this well-constructed story. Everything falls into place nicely, and was sweetly told. Good entry for this topic. Kudos to you.
04/29/07
A very sweet ending to a charming story. I smiled as I read it. Very nice job!
So sad and yet so delightful, I was happy she said yes to dinner! Great story writing here. Keep up the good work.
04/29/07
Wonderful, engaging story. I felt the emotions of the characters and loved being drawn into this budding romance. Awesome writing!
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