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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Write in the ROMANCE genre (04/19/07)

TITLE: A Husband For Me
By Bonnie Snider
04/23/07


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A husband! I thought
Thats what I need.
One that will help me
and lift me up.
One that won't harm me
or knock me down.
One who will hold me close
and wrap his arms around me
for everyone to see.
One who cares for me.

A husband, Oh yes!
Just for me
A father for his children
Not as the world can see,
one who say's;'It's ok'
when they fail miserably.
One who say's;'Get back up
and try again, your falling
perfectly into my plan.'

Oh Yes! A husband for me,
One who will touch me tenderly,
and fall deep into my heart
where he is safe to rest.
where he can feel
the joy he puts into me,
as I bring out his best.

Oh a husband for me!
I now know I have
in my Heavenly Father
who lives inside me,
where he created a place to reside.
Where he never fails to Love
as the Love he created inside of me,
And his arms are around me
where everyone can see
who truly cares for me.
And when we all fall,even me,
he helps back up
so I won't fall out of his hand
and the plans he has for me.

Oh Yes! I have found
a husband for me.


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Donna Emery04/27/07
Very nice. Your love for the Lord is evident here. Nicely done.
Brenda Welc04/28/07
Joy and great excitment flow from your verses here. Good job.
Mariane Holbrook05/08/08
This is such a precious poem. You have expressed what's on the heart of many people and you did it so effectively. I love your writing style! And thank you for the kind comment you left on my entry in master's this week. You are so right that just a word here and there, watered, prayed over, and entrusted to God's care, can have far-reaching results that we won't know about until we get to heaven.
Thank you, dearheart, for your entry and for commenting so sweetly on mine.