The Official Writing Challenge
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Wonderful romance. God works in mysterious ways. Good writing. I could picture the boy with his father here.
04/27/07
Very nice. I enjoyed reading it!
04/28/07
Nicely done. I liked the romantic felt it left with me.
04/30/07
A good story for this time in our nation!

I would have liked to know more about them when they were falling in love...we don't really get to know them beyond seeing each other and being together whenever they can...all rather vague. Some specific events might give additional interest.

I like the little boy at the beginning and end...nice touch.

04/30/07
Sweet and touching, and very well tied together; beginning to end. Good work!
05/01/07
Very sweet story! I liked how they were both praying people and how they just knew they were meant for each other! Good job! :)
05/02/07
Charming, heartwarming story of romance at its finest! Thank you for sharing this story from your heart!
05/02/07
Very nice; and nicer still when you know it's basically a true story. Thanks, Cheri
05/02/07
Very sweet - and I love the little boy you added - makes it that much sweeter.
You did a good job with the story. The title expresses it all. God's plans are beyond our understanding!