The Official Writing Challenge
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04/26/07
You told this movingly, with a great message and a lovely ending. Well done. (I think the judges are going to have trouble this week)
Lover's quarrel. It's always so romantic making up. There's also a good pov here. The transition of scenes was a little tricky here, but I think you handled them nicely. Good writing.
04/27/07
I really felt drawn into your story--great depiction of the characters. Good job!
04/28/07
Loved the last line. It really added another dimension to your story.
04/28/07
Awesome writing. I could see every scene unfolding in detail. Great job!
04/30/07
Very, very good. One of my favorites in this level. Excellent description. Well done!
05/01/07
Move up a level or two. It is unfair for you to compete with the real beginners. You write exceptionally well. This is a well crafted and well written romance story. Keep writing and I expect to read your next story as an intermediate or advanced level writer. Great job.