The Official Writing Challenge
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Good man flirts with woman, woman is impressed story here. I like the way God fit into the situation. God helps to make relationships lasting.
04/26/07
Cute romance here. Nice story.
Thank God there is (ONE) writer in the family. This is absolutely beautiful. It seems that you've coppied my style of writing from the heart. Your honesty and surprize ending brought tears to my eyes. I will be tracking your writing.
04/29/07
I'm not sure why my wife considered our first date a "total disaster" - was it because I forgot where I parked her car and we walked in the rain for two hours trying to find it or that I did not give her a good night kiss until the second date. 21 years later and she still won't let me forget it.
04/30/07
What a lovely story. You held my interest throughout. I enjoyed this story, especially after reading Clyde's note. Good job!
This is well done. I can see this as a series or a christian magazine fiction. I like your characters and you tie the story together nicely. Keep up the good work. Thank you for the kind and encouraging words you gave for my poem A Spool of Scarlet Thread. I had written this originally for the sewing challenge but it came to me as the deadline arose so I just wanted to share what the Lord gave me to mabe touch someone else. God bless you and your writing.It's never too late to start writing Emily.:0)I put my writing on the back burner along with my artwork but I am getting back into it thanks to the Lord and FW. Have a wonderful day in the Lord both of you,sounds like you two are close.You are blessed.:0)Janice