The Official Writing Challenge
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This is very good writing and an intersting story. I don't see the romance, but it's a commanding piece.
04/26/07
Great story telling. I enjoyed reading this.
04/30/07
A wonderful memory, and I enjoyed reading it. I don't really see any romance either, but it's a fun story to read.
04/30/07
I forgot to choose a category. OOPS!
05/01/07
This is an interesting romance one between Aunt and Nephew. I won't tell my other Aunts and Uncles but I have two favorite Aunts. There is a special connection here and humor is a large part of it. Your appreciation of humor is evident, that is likely to make you his favorite aunt for life. This is a unique take on this challenge. Thanks. I would caution you to watch the run on sentences. I recognize them because my first drafts are full of them.