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A unique and creative approach that I have seen in books but not for the short-story. Great job of conveying the ache of a lost love and how God has provided the healing process as part of the way in which we are fearfully and wonderfully made. Nature too is a great healer, not Mother Nature, but nature that God created. Very good writing!
A thoughtful walk through a young woman's diary. Good pov here. Yes, God helps us fill the voids that come into our lives. Good writing.
This was very good kept my interest, Good Job
This is very true, and it was well written. I feel like we had a glimpse into this young woman's life. Nice work!
I love this story being told through the pages of a diary! Creative and sucessful!
Very nice work. I like the diary approach. Blessings, Cheri
I loved the diary format, the time period, and her insightfulness. An enjoyable read!
Some very sharp, crisp writing. I enjoyed it very much. Not a big fan of diary stories, but you pulled it off well. I'm impressed. God bless.
You captured the elements of the senses experiencing her pain and her healing from a lost love. Wonderfully written.
She should have dumped that jerk Henry long ago. Waste of time if you ask me. Glad she's moving on and you're still writing. Good job and God bless.