The Official Writing Challenge
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A unique and creative approach that I have seen in books but not for the short-story. Great job of conveying the ache of a lost love and how God has provided the healing process as part of the way in which we are fearfully and wonderfully made. Nature too is a great healer, not Mother Nature, but nature that God created. Very good writing!
A thoughtful walk through a young woman's diary. Good pov here. Yes, God helps us fill the voids that come into our lives. Good writing.
This was very good kept my interest, Good Job
04/30/07
This is very true, and it was well written. I feel like we had a glimpse into this young woman's life. Nice work!
05/02/07
I love this story being told through the pages of a diary! Creative and sucessful!
05/02/07
Very nice work. I like the diary approach. Blessings, Cheri
05/02/07
I loved the diary format, the time period, and her insightfulness. An enjoyable read!
05/02/07
Some very sharp, crisp writing. I enjoyed it very much. Not a big fan of diary stories, but you pulled it off well. I'm impressed. God bless.
05/03/07
You captured the elements of the senses experiencing her pain and her healing from a lost love. Wonderfully written.
05/03/07
She should have dumped that jerk Henry long ago. Waste of time if you ask me. Glad she's moving on and you're still writing. Good job and God bless.