The Official Writing Challenge
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This portrays a very good Christian love relationship. Right on the target for romance. I do think the last line should say "till death do THEY part". Or better yet "till in death they do part." But overall this is VERY good.
04/26/07
You can just feel the love in the air. Very well wriiten descriptive story.
04/30/07
Oh, this is very nice. I loved the way they gave the glory to God. This is a very nice story.
05/02/07
This is true romance and you did a really good job of portraying this all the way through. You also did a good job of 'showing' and not telling by your descriptions. Kudos to ya! ;)
05/02/07
Nice descriptions and you did such a good job creating such lovely characters I'd want to be friends with them!