The Official Writing Challenge
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This portrays a very good Christian love relationship. Right on the target for romance. I do think the last line should say "till death do THEY part". Or better yet "till in death they do part." But overall this is VERY good.
You can just feel the love in the air. Very well wriiten descriptive story.
Oh, this is very nice. I loved the way they gave the glory to God. This is a very nice story.
This is true romance and you did a really good job of portraying this all the way through. You also did a good job of 'showing' and not telling by your descriptions. Kudos to ya! ;)
Nice descriptions and you did such a good job creating such lovely characters I'd want to be friends with them!