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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Write in the ROMANCE genre (04/19/07)

TITLE: "Puppy Love"
By Frank Salerni
04/19/07


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“Puppy Love”

Your eyes capture my soul like one raindrop can draw another into itself.
Your voice is intriguing to me; I want to know about everything you have to say.
You really never have to utter a word, because your very presence will compel me to listen as your heart beats evermore in time with mine.
Your fragrance will stay with me the entire day, if we are apart that long.

I know your ways, your moves, and your joy.
People may talk, because we are not from the same country, but I care not.
We may be of different color, but under our skin beats two hearts made for each other.
I must admit that my thoughts are not always without the wrong intentions toward you, but it is that animal instinct in me that I must try to control.

We are so young, so innocent, and so vulnerable.
People do not seem to understand. We are drawn toward each other like strong magnets; what harm is there in that?
Our feelings overshadow our behavior.
Who is to say that it would be wrong to unite as one?

I am compelled to whine because of my displeasure with the human race and their desire to try and keep us apart.
Although they may try time and time again, I am determined to be with you.
The time is approaching so that I will no longer be able to control myself.

Your breath is now heavy upon me.
Your playful ways are more than I can bear.
Your hair, your lips, your mouth…what was that sound?
It is my master’s voice.
I can hear him calling my name… “Fido, Fido?”

Lets go, fluffy! It’s time to EAT!


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Jacquelyn Horne04/26/07
True puppy love. What a surprise ending! This is well written (prose?) At least it seems so to me.
Janice Cartwright04/26/07
You must know Yeller, my yellow Lab. Her look could melt a hole in the side of a bank vault.
Brenda Welc04/26/07
Very cute story. Well written.
Pam Carlson-Hetland04/27/07
Whoa...you really had me going on this one. And then came the end! Cute. Made me chuckle - at the end.
Aylin Smith 04/29/07
I enjoyed this! Good job!
Donna Emery04/30/07
Cute, cute, cute. You must be a dog lover. I enjoyed this nice little story.