The Official Writing Challenge
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04/20/07
This was cute--it's so true that kids don't "get" adult talk, more often than we realize.

I was stymied a bit by "dajazu"--did you mean deja vu? And there were several places where you didn't put in closing quotation marks. With those minor edits, this will be a peach of a piece.
This is really cute. A few word errors, but very good. Watch your "than" and "then" usage. But this was such a good article that most may not notice it.
04/22/07
This was awesome. I had a hard time not laughing outloud as I read it. Keep up the good writing.
04/22/07
What an adorable story. I liked "get your own pole pit. I had to read it twice - I thought "what's a pole pit?" That's probably what Chad was thinking too. Very good.