The Official Writing Challenge
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Thanks for the gentle reminder that God loves us and wants us to smile. Wonderful memories here.
04/21/07
I liked the flow of this piece. Keep up the great writing!
04/22/07
Good character study--I feel as if I know your dad just from these few cute paragraphs describing him.

Be careful of dangling participles, and of using second person.

Nice little lesson at the end; this was a tidy little essay.