The Official Writing Challenge
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Sounds like "stand up" comedy. Jokes with punch lines. This would be good material for comedians.
04/21/07
Good jokes strung together. Keep writing!
04/22/07
The sort of observational himor that I always tell myself I'm going to write down in a notebook. Fun to read.
04/22/07
So much truth here! I hope you don't mind me pointing out a couple of things that will help you grow as a writer. Subject/verb agreement - like "pastor talk a lot" should be "pastors talk" or "pastor talks" and "Psychologist have said" should be "psychologists have said" or "a psychologist has said". Also, you've got a few places where it seems a word is missing. A careful proofreading, or reading it out loud will help you catch these. You did make me smile - I like your humor. Keep up the good work!