The Official Writing Challenge
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Sounds like a fun person to live with. Cute story.
04/21/07
Your husband must have gone to the same comedy school as mine! Great story!
04/23/07
Cute and clever. I would have loved a bit more humor woven in, but your ending was certainly worth a giggle or two. Keep writing!
04/24/07
Sounds like he's master of the one liners. :-) Your story flows well. To make it really engaging for the reader you need to show the reader what is happening rather than tell. PM me if you're not sure what I mean.