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Well done. There was only a couple words that had typos, I have done that too, don't feel bad. This is great. I like how you have taken this event from the Bible and added your own flavor. The inner thoughts and self dialogue was convincing and helped the reader to follow the detective through this story. Keep up the good work! God bless!:0)Janice+-
A good account of the scene of the resurrection. Don't forget to use words in the era of which you are writing. I don't think UFO would have been a familiar term then. But, all in all, a very good writing.
04/14/07
Great! Case closed indeed. :) Just a note - myself is one word. Great writing here - I like the idea of a modern Private Eye investigating this centuries old "mystery". Keep writing - you've got talent!