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This was a beautiful story. It brought tears to my eyes.
04/12/07
Great writing. Nice ending!
Yet another mystery of God's grace and love. Thank you for sharing...
Good writing. Easy to read. I liked the comparison to Christ at the end.
04/15/07
wow! This was so good. You did an excellent job. Keep it up.
Wow...this is a great piece. It gives such hope. Good writing. Keep it up.
04/17/07
This was good! I'm so glad it has a happy ending of forgiveness and maybe some more communication between the couple.
04/17/07
You have a deep and mature insight into the hearts you portray in this mystery story. You are certainly destined for higher levels here at faithwriters and elsewhere. I look forward to reading more of your work.