The Official Writing Challenge
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A definite murder mystery! I'm sure you'll do well...
Liked the last sentence. Good job.
04/14/07
Wonderfully descriptive setting for your story, which had the suspenseful atmosphere, dialogue, and tone of an old-time detective tale. Good job! :)
04/17/07
Pretty good! Reminds me of an Agatha Christie. I liked the surprise ending where it turned out to be the butler...why do they always do it? ^_^