The Official Writing Challenge
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God always protects his own and causes others to accept him. Good point.
Ooh, there is a fantasy twist here with the magician. Kinda sinister-spooky, but the right idea, I'm guessing there wasn't enough room (word count) for you to fit everything in, it seems like there is more to this story. Good job!