The Official Writing Challenge
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04/14/07
Great start! You had me very engaged. I SO wish you had continued this - given us more detail about what happened between the characters! I hope you expand this!
04/14/07
I can hear the eerie music in the background - spooky! I saw a couple of incomplete sentences, but what a good lead-in a story I hope you will continue to work on. Good job!
Never saw that ending coming... very Hollywood... leaving loose ends for a sequel!
04/15/07
Wow! Great beginning. I definitely want to read more. Well written, and way to leave the reader hanging!