The Official Writing Challenge
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Good writing. You kept my attention all the way. What an expansion could be made on this if time and space allowed!
04/18/07
I was living in SA at the time these girls disappeared. You have summarised it well and with feeling.
04/19/07
Congrats on placing! This was well written and very disturbing. We are reminded daily that there is a very real evil in this world. Your concluding comment was right on.