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Very cute! A well-done article. A humorous solving of a mystery.
04/12/07
Good story!
04/13/07
Good job, I like the way it ended.
I liked this one.
I really enjoyed your mystery! Well written with an interesting plot, good suspense, and neat conclusion. Way to go!
04/17/07
Great writing! Good job with Ralph's dialog especially - you really brought out his fear. One thing that confused me - when Mr. Patterson decided to spend the night in the church. Is that Ralph or the Pastor? I really enjoyed this mystery. :)
I really enjoyed this story. It held me all through as I wondered how the crucifix was moved, and then it finished with a good laugh. Thankyou and well done.
04/18/07
Interesting mystery! Really enjoyed your writing! Great job!
04/18/07
Great mystery! This is your first entry? WOW! Amazing stuff, I really love the characters and it was quite fun to join Mr. Arkwell in the stakeout. ^_^
04/18/07
I believe you are suited for the mystery genre! And this doesn't read like a "first entry." You are a great writer! Good work, and many blessings, Cheri
04/18/07
This is one solid, strong piece of writing and yes, mystery suits you. You won't be in beginners long. Great work.
04/18/07
Great detail and a fun story too. I was definitely intrigued throughout.
You have good command of words, dialogue and sceene setting. You move the reader along at a nice pace and hold our interest. I sense you won't be in level one for long. Great Job and keep developing your talent for writing.
This is an excellent mystery--really carried the reader along. I like your conclusion.
04/19/07
Loved the characters, some great suspense tied up with humor. Good pace. Keep up the good work! (sorry, I really didn't see anything major jump out at me that needed work lol)