The Official Writing Challenge
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A theme echoed in many of the entries this week: it's not about us, its about Him. I don't think this is any accident.
You have written a very innovative, creative piece. Your dialog was well done. You show a lot of talent. If it were up to me, I'd say, "Move up to Intermediates!" Congratulations!
I enjoyed this 'visit' to the throne room of Heaven on the night of Jesus' birth. You have a nicely expressed touch of humor. Thanks for sharing.
Perhaps there's hope for my singing voice after reading this.

Very well done. Took a different path than I initially thought. The first paragraph brought tears to my eyes - the throne empty and heaven's praise silent.

God bless and keep writing.
WOW! I just loved this angel and the writing was so strong I could just see the whole scene as if I had a front row seat. Great job!
Well done - God can do so much more with a willing servant sometimes than with a talented one...
I enjoyed this. Followed it all the way through. There are some verb tense errors here, but they can be easily fixed. Good job.