The Official Writing Challenge
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03/15/07
This has great potential. I felt like you had a couple themes within music you were working on and perhaps narrowing to one topic would make this even better. Good writing, keep at it!
As a Pastor's wife and Worship Leader for many years I can feel your conviction. I too see ground work for several messages here. By introducing fewer topics, and shortening some sentences, you've got a powerful piece. Keep writing!
Interesting, informative piece. A different approach. Good job.