The Official Writing Challenge
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Wonderful message and soooooooooooooo true.
I was gripped with that opening line, praying in a closet. I could immediately picture this person weeping with her feelings of helplessness, hiding there to keep her own pain away from those she loved. Then you felt her being washed over with love and a feeling that she was being renewed came to me. I thought you said powerful things in such a short piece
What you wrote reminded me of my sister who is newly diagnosed with Pulmonary Fibrosis. She just shared to me today how her prayers give her peace in her heart. Jesus Christ is the Best Physician. It's people like you and my sister who taught me to appreciate the gift of life..and living one breath at a time.
04/30/05
Yes, one day at a time. I need to be reminded about that, too. Thanks
Brief but powerful.
05/02/05
i loved it. you just did it for me. you made me look at each and every breath with a new perspective. keep up the great work. blessings kazza...
05/03/05
Hi Kathy. I just wanted to take a moment to encourage you and let you know that you made it into the semi-finals for the Level 1 Champion Challenge. So although you didn't actually win a place or Highly Commended, you were in the running. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)