The Official Writing Challenge
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Your story is the best kind. It made me laugh and it made me cry. And it brough back memories. I agree elders are the best audiences. Like children they are the most forgiving.
03/15/07
I love the title of this piece. Two singing sisters certainly says it all. Just a tip-some extra spaces in between would make for easier reading. I throughly enjoyed reading this and I liked the part in the front with the husband and his palm pilot. Sounds like someone I know! ^_^
Humorous and yet very touching. I loved the ending where the man became important to the theme of things. Good job.
03/18/07
I love ministries like this. Nursing homes are a wonderful mission field. I hope this is true and if so, keep doing it! I loved the ending. Nice job
Dee, this is delightful. I love the message at the end.
07/05/07
Love the detail throughout this. You put us right in the middle of it. A lovely first entry, my friend!