The Official Writing Challenge
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03/15/07
I didn't see that end coming, good element of surprise there. I could really feel for her, searching for the perfect wedding song. I almost missed the tie in of the title though. Otherwise, this was pretty good, especially the touch with her tears falling on the paper with the song title on that line. ^_^
03/18/07
A very sad story but it was very well written. In retrospect, the title says it all. I am looking forward to reading more of your work
03/18/07
Very sad. You pictured this well. I could feel all the early emotions and the latter grief. Good writing.
03/22/07
Congratulations on your First Place! This story was worthy of every point it received. Wonderful...
03/22/07
Nice sentiment, although I don't know how one chews a pen industriously. Alot of potential here.