The Official Writing Challenge
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WOW!!! I really enjoyed this write. Very nice.
This reminded me of God's hand in the making the quilt of humanity. How he made each "one" different but yet was determined to sew them all together in one unique thread--His love.


This was a pleasure to read.
04/28/05
Is this you Penny? I guess you've been through the wash a few times now :) Very sweet poem.
My Maker is an excellent entry. I especially like your use of words in describing God's unique creativity in making us all different. Good Job. P.K.
This reminded me of Psalms 139. Where we are created individually by God.
04/30/05
Particularly like the image of the needles and thread, they connect with
‘Was he wearing a pinstripe suit when he was crucified?’ Very cool.
This is good: ‘Even if I am starting to go a little saggy round the edges!’
Thought! If you used the word frayed instead of saggy you would be bringing us back to your original image.
I thoroughly enjoyed this. a great lesson for us all. it's not always easy to like ourselves.