The Official Writing Challenge
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03/18/07
Wonderful story and lesson. I found the dialogue just a bit strained, but the message cam through loud and clear. Keep writing!
03/27/07
This has great potential here and was an enjoyable read. Keep writing!
You have a good command of sentence structure and mature vocabulary usage, showing you are no novice to writing. My only suggestion is that you have a look at judging criteria over at the message board area. After I went through their list of judging points the other day I realized I had been missing the mark in several areas. I hope you will continue to develop your writing skills as I sense great potential for future projects.