The Official Writing Challenge
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What a wonderful nostalgic piece. Good writing. I wandered into the past with Queenie and enjoyed the walk.
03/17/07
What a lovely story. I used to sing that song a lot in my teens. Reading Queenie's memories almost brought a lump to my throat, and yes, I could have been there with her too. Thank goodness I'm not 93 yet and still have lots of life left in me, God willing. :-)

Thanks for the good read. Well done.
Congratulations on your Second Place win with a well deserved piece. I've been singing this song to me grandson when putting him to sleep since he was born (he's 18 months). The second verse I changed... "You are my grandson, my only grandson... so please don't take my Jordan away" :)
03/22/07
Well deserve win, keep up the good work!
Wow. This is really good. Congrats on your 2nd place win. I loved the ending.