The Official Writing Challenge
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03/15/07
A neat story of redemption for BOTH characters! A space between paragraphs would make this a bit easier to read. I enjoyed watching your main character (you?) coming around to her own repentance. Keep writing!
It's great what the true love of God will do. It changes us. Good story.
03/17/07
Well told dilema with a wonderful "just like God" ending! Great job.
God may be grooming you for a place in ministry to kids just like Christy. Keep praying, keep loving and keep writing!