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What lovely memories. What a wonderful lady. I could just see her whistling with the birds. Wonderful piece.
Nice memory piece. I think the last two sentences in the first paragraph should be one sentence broken up with commas or a semi-colon. Your decription of your grandma makes me too long to be that kind of grandma to my grandchildren. Good job!
Very nice!
Beautiful tribute to your grandmother! May we all bring the music of love into the lives of our families! :)
This is good. I think the start is very strong, descriptive, and captures reader interest. The story is solid and I especially like the line about how you were Grandma's prized possessions at church. Great work!