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What lovely memories. What a wonderful lady. I could just see her whistling with the birds. Wonderful piece.
Nice memory piece. I think the last two sentences in the first paragraph should be one sentence broken up with commas or a semi-colon. Your decription of your grandma makes me too long to be that kind of grandma to my grandchildren. Good job!
03/18/07
Very nice!
03/19/07
Beautiful tribute to your grandmother! May we all bring the music of love into the lives of our families! :)
03/26/07
This is good. I think the start is very strong, descriptive, and captures reader interest. The story is solid and I especially like the line about how you were Grandma's prized possessions at church. Great work!