The Official Writing Challenge
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Wonderful memory piece. Good writing. However, watch your "than"s and "then"s. Keep working. This is good.
03/15/07
There's nothing like good memories. And I'm glad the Lord instructed us to make a joyful "noise". That puts me off the bench and into the game. I get to play!

Thanks for sharing the memory. Keep writing!
Thank you for this encouraging piece of writing. Believing that I have the vocal chords of a frog, I too, am often too shy or embarrassed to sing. Yet even the song of the frog is music to the ears of God. As you so rightly say, any song of praise is welcomed by our Lord.
03/19/07
I like your description of the rocks would sound ;)
03/20/07
Thanks for the encouragement! Loved your artical. I will with boldness sing joyfully to the Lord giving it all I got. I have been holding back, as I have been told I can't sing. But as long as God gives me a voice I need to use it for Him and so i will.
03/22/07
Loved the title! I agree with others a nice story, if you want to continue to grow in writing always have someone proofread for you so that your piece will shine, God Bless