The Official Writing Challenge
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03/10/07
Thank you for a sweet reminder of my roots in a country church. I could "see" your setting through me memories. Very tight story, not a word wasted. Keep writing for Him.
03/12/07
Wonderful. Well written, easy flow. Excellant message. I pray this story could be true more often.
God bless and keep writing.
03/12/07
A good lesson and nicely written. I enjoyed this. Nice work
03/15/07
Very nice! A few minor punctuation errors, but they don't distract from your story at all. Loved the message, an all-too important one. Keep up the good work!
03/15/07
Good story, well told.
03/15/07
A lovely story with a wonderful reminder for us all. Keep writing!
03/15/07
Great description of Beth's shopping excursion. Her heart was in the right place but what a great message she was able to take home after church! Nicely done!