The Official Writing Challenge
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03/08/07
This made me laugh. I hate shopping too -- especially clothes shopping. I saw one or two punctuation issues, but otherwise this read very nicely. Good story.
03/10/07
What a great picture that I know I've been through at various times. I enjoyed the narrative so much I didn't note any writing errors. Your title is excellent! Thanks for sharing and keep writing.
03/11/07
Loved it. I hope you didn't tell your husband about this. I would not let my wife live it down if this had been her. God bless and keep writing (and shopping).
03/12/07
An understandable interlude and it was well written. You made me commiserate with your main character. Good job
03/15/07
Good use of humor and told well. Good job!