The Official Writing Challenge
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03/10/07
Excellent comparison between life and life with Christ. Just enough history to set up the miracle of her new life, but not enough to compete with her redemption. Word choices are rich, allowing the reader to add their own vision to your scenes. Very interesting use of topic. Thank you for the vision.
03/11/07
I loved this unique POV. A good contrast to illustrate a good point. Nice story
03/15/07
Good descriptive words - you painted a picture. Great job!