The Official Writing Challenge
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Very cute and your last comment is so true! My oldest son gets so tired of hearing "Just one more" and I am sure my baby will too when he is old enough to understand.
03/12/07
Ooooooooh! I can't imagine being a mom with seven kids to take shopping! I enjoyed reading your interesting look at shopping from a child's perspective! I might suggest some proofreading before you submit your piece, though, to catch errors that might detract somewhat from your story. I hope to read more of your writing! :)
03/13/07
Your mom sure showed strength. I had 8 kids and left them all at home with their Dad. Nice memory. Thanks for sharing.
03/14/07
A very nice story. I found myself wishing it were longer. Keep writing! (Just one more!! ;-)