The Official Writing Challenge
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Good story here. It was easy to follow all the way through. Nice work.
Beautiful story. Great sentiment and the descriptive language puts you right there. Great Job.
03/13/07
This is a beautiful, well-written piece. Keep up the good work.
03/14/07
A good look into the "guilt" factor. Well written piece. Flows well. I am happy for the ending. If your friend had an different outcome would that guilt factor remain as with so many military veterans? Why should I have survived and not my buddy?
God bless and keep writing.
03/14/07
I liked this story and enjoyed the ending. A good reminder to follow the leadings of the Spirit. Nice job