The Official Writing Challenge
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This is just beautiful. I love your description - it is extremely vivid. Great writing!
Your intriguing title and first couple paragraphs drew me in to your story. Great message!
I just loved that story. It gives me something to think about.
Aww, you tugged on my heartstrings and made me feel all gushy and gooey! (That's a good thing.) I thought at first it might get too corny, but it didn't cross that line. Just the right about of sweetness, and of course a GREAT message. Good job!
What a beautiful shopping trip! When I read the title I thought she'd entered a world with the best shopping bargains. The twist on this onew as even better than sale bargains though. It leaves a nice, slightly haunting sort of feeling. I like the touch with seeing the shopping bags and the three items. This was a wonderful entry with a great message! ^_^
Elegant writing skills! I loved it!
I liked that faith, hope and love were freely given to her, and that it was Jesus who “purchased it all.” Very nicely written.
Excellent! You told this with true skill. Nicely done. I want to read more of your work.
Your story is beautiful. You did an excellent job. I really can't tell you how to iimprove on it.
This is very, very good. I liked the the line about the items being purchased long ago. Well done.
Great creative story! Blessings!
This reminded me a little bit of a Christmas Carol, this was so creative and a message we all could embrace. Your descriptions were so strong, especially in the beginning. Great work!