The Official Writing Challenge
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What a good thought. I can't believe all of these thoughts I'm reading in the first level came from the single word "shopping", but they are really good examples. Thanks for sharing.
03/11/07
You have a 'not to do' list? I've not heard of that before - we need to have a chat sometime!

Good story, well done.
03/12/07
Well done!
03/12/07
What a neat concept and image! I loved where Jesus shreds the enemy store list and writes His own. I think 'loved' and 'Mine' were my favorite items on that list. Good job!
I really liked this! Great food for thought. :)
03/14/07
Great story--I need to more of a lister says my boss said just today!
03/14/07
What a great perspective! I like this take on the topic and especially like the end with adding 'amazing' to the list, would the would "You" be missing somewhere in the line where He says "My daughter is amazing"? I think it might make it a little more personal, but just my own opinion there! ^_^ Great job!
03/14/07
Very nice and complete in its simplicity. Great job!
03/15/07
The whole story is very good but that last line, what a powerhouse. Good job!