The Official Writing Challenge
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03/09/07
I enjoyed this a lot. It was so well written. My favorite lines are "imperfect church, that serves a perfect God" and "fellowship with sinners saved by grace".

I've simply got to quit reading today! I have no tears left. Such a beautiful piece. I can't believe it's in the first level. Good job.
03/12/07
Good entry. I think sometimes the problem that we have in "shopping" for a church home is that the church is trying to be all that we need. Remember the Israelites didn't even know it when God's presence left the temple. When you find Jesus in a church - that's the one to choose. I'm precahing but you started it! Good job.
03/12/07
Sorry - I should have read that first. Preaching not precahing! Blessings - Cindy
03/12/07
Oh, I liked that! Church shopping is Never easy, and you captured it. Good job!
03/14/07
Excellent! A perfect poem and a good lesson. Very good job
03/15/07
I loved this "right on" poem! Well-written with a terrific message! CONGRATULATIONS on your 3rd place win! :)
Congratulations on a subject we all hesitate to discuss, let alone address it through our writing! Well said...
03/16/07
Congratulations on a great piece. I'm not a poetry fan (I think it's too sophisticated for me), but this was so easy to read, with such an awesome message. Good job.