The Official Writing Challenge
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Everybody is breaking my heart today. But that's good. God said we need a broken spirit. Very good story. I hope it is true, except for the sadness.
I loved the way that you expressed the inner feelings of someone who has struggled to have a child. Children are a blessing and we need to be reminded of that. Although somewhat melancholic, you have covered the topic very well. Difficulty brings happiness if you will allow God to open your eyes. Good insights!
03/12/07
That was wonderful! You drew me in and kept me reading clear through to the end. Good job!
03/14/07
Oh, this is so wonderful. My heart was so touched by this story and the description of Isaiah and his God-sent mother. What a beautiful tale. Super job!
03/14/07
Wow, well done.
03/20/07
Jorge ... is this based on a true story? It moved me to tears. I hope you'll keep entering the Challenge. You write well, and I see a lot of potential.

With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator and Editor, FaithWriters' Magazine).