The Official Writing Challenge
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04/18/05
You communicate your enthusiasm really well! I wanted to join in the clapping! Two points - you repeated the word "glee" in the first few lines. I think another word would have been better. In the last verse "you'll" - I assume you meant "you all", but you'll means "you will".
04/18/05
Wonderful, I could feel your joy.
04/21/05
Felt the joy! Well done!