The Official Writing Challenge
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04/18/05
Good poem. I thought that your opening few words related to thinking about the future rather looking back at the past - "In one year's time". How about "In the space of a year.."?
04/18/05
Nice Poem. Well written with feeling
04/18/05
Jesus know's every anniversary
Yeshua bless
04/22/05
Great poem! Yet you're Entry must have 150 words (Minimum)
04/25/05
Very nice :)It's nice to be reminded of the light of Jesus :)
04/26/05
Christian, this was truly a lovely poem. The only problem was (as some have already pointed out) that it was under the minimum word count and so had to be disqualifed - which was such a shame. The minimum word count is 150 words, and your poem came in at just 91 words. Hope you'll jump into the Challenge again - just keep the word count limits in mind. 150 minimum and 750 maximum. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)