The Official Writing Challenge
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03/08/07
Very nice - were you talking about what Jesus has done for us? I thought you were. Good dialogue and expession.
Nice new take on this age-old story of the garment of salvation.
03/08/07
Thank you. God bless. Keep on writing!
03/10/07
Thanks for this parable. It helps us understand the amazing deal we got after searching in all the wrong places. I was confused at first by the "shades." I thought you were shopping for sunglasses! Also, an easy fix that, once learned, is easy to remember. Put your periods and commas INSIDE the quotation marks.

You've got a very creative entry here, and it makes a complex concept crystal clear. You must be a writer! Keep it up!
03/12/07
We have so many choices. Making the right one is so difficult, but you've managed to pass your message on in a very unique way.
03/13/07
Priceless! Fantabulous entry! Couldn't have said it better myself. What a beautiful thought! Double Kudos for a job well done!
03/14/07
A nice little modernized parable. I enjoyed this, and it is easy to relate to. Good work