The Official Writing Challenge
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03/08/07
Terrific detail here. I loved the message you shared! Struck a chord and that's what writing should do. I think the ending was bit rushed but loved the last line. Very good writing!!
Enjoyed this little conversation. Good advice here. Good story.
03/10/07
Interesting entry. I like the humour too.
03/10/07
This was a very good story. As with all good stories, there was a unique, fresh, new AHA! moment. You've seen through to a truth and expressed it in a fresh, new way, using humor to present it in a non-preachy manner. This was so well done that, if there were grammatical errors, I didn't notice them (and I have an eye for grammar mistakes). The point is, I can sail past mistakes in search of a fresh, new AHA! Very well done.
03/13/07
You took an obscure moment in a movie and turned it into a wonderful lesson. This is very well done. Keep writing!
Very well done. The humor illustrated with comparison and your dialogue and description made this some alive for me.Thank you for sharing this story. God bless and keep on writing.:0)