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04/18/05
I enjoyed the way that you created tension in your character - you could feel his emotions. The last paragraph lost me - was it just a family reunion? I got the impression that it was a school reunion, so the presence of his father confused me.
04/18/05
God story! I loved it.Keep writing
04/18/05
Yeshua bless
keep up the good writing
Great take on a modern day prodigal son.
04/23/05
Wow, what a tear-jerker of an ending! Very well thought out.
I got goosbumps when I read, "tattered from being hung repeatedly over all these years". I love the ending!