The Official Writing Challenge
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Excellant example of spiritual truth put in a fashon that even young minds can understand.
Waht a wonderful example of how mistakes are repaired. Even mistakes in God. Good writing.
03/07/07
Well-written, sweet story with an excellent message! Good job! :)
This is beautifully writtten and has such a nice lesson woven into it as well. I enjoyed it!