The Official Writing Challenge
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Good memory piece. I think the last line would read better in quotes, but this is good writing.
Great story. The last two paragraphs either need quotes or italics (for thoughts). Otherwise, they sound like a POV shift -- from third person to first person. I love the thought of the red thread running through the tapestry of our lives, and how she started with Moses instead of simply using the Cross. Beautifully done.