The Official Writing Challenge
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03/05/07
Really good dialogue and excellent way to spread the Good News!
What an interesting concept! I would like to see your story expanded to include more dialogue in the telling of it. Keep writing.
03/05/07
Very nice!! The only suggestion I have is the dilogue tags you used and to watch the adverbs and adverbs -otherwise- lovely story!!
I love family stories of faith passed on to another generation. We can now hope that the granddaughter will follow in granma's path. But God may have a path of his own for her. Thanks for the special read.